Stories...all Kinds - Blizzard Sector

**Pamela** · 11-02-2003, 08:45 AM

FEAR/DEATH

The day has been long and rife with uncertainty, so Rachael decides to soak away her aches and worries in a long…hot bath. Stopping in the kitchen, on her way thru to the master bath, she reaches in the refrigerator, taking out an ice-cold bottle of very dry wine.
Pouring herself a glass, she adds two pieces of dark bitter chocolate to a small plate, then proceeds to her room. Stepping around a corner she begins to fill the tub…when there is a knock at her front door. Rachael is not expecting any friends nor does she have any desire for company at the moment. Deciding to ignore the knocking, she returns to check on the level of her bath water.
The sound has somehow changed in the to more of a loud …insistent banging. Suddenly filled with a sense of foreboding……Rachael creeps forward to peer out a small slit in between the curtains…trying to catch a glimpse of this unknown person………………
No one is standing there!
Hearing a crash from the rear of the house, Rachael jumps and her heart now seems to be in her throat! Turning back to the front window…having decided to take her chances and leave the house …she screams as a face peers back at her…all teeth and leering eyes!
That is when the moaning begins to howl from the kitchen….the sound seeming to move slowly towards her. Panic now seizes her and she dashes for the spare bedroom …hoping to lock herself in….and use the phone to call for help! Slamming the door behind her , Rachael locks the door behind her. Leaning against it she pants and tries to listen to the wailing from outside her door……Then she sees the glow of the yellow eyes! Staring at her with malicious intent…..she now has nowhere to run….no way to hide! Feeling as though she is slipping away.Rachael’s final moments…as Death draws nearer to her, are somewhat random.
Filled with the thoughts of what could have been and never was…..her final dying breath whispers to no one…..why????

((I hope you enjoyed it!))

**TNTPaladin** · 11-03-2003, 12:57 PM

Wow, great story. I love your descriptive language, it adds that little spark to the story, that I dont seem to have.

Ever thought of being a writer ? Or a game storyline writer ?

**Pamela** · 11-03-2003, 01:12 PM

Thank you! I have never thought of doing game stories untill you just mentioned it.I have considered writing...but only recently.Why do you say you dont have that spark??....*smiles*...Your entry in the other thread was great I thought!

**TNTPaladin** · 11-03-2003, 01:15 PM

What are you talking about, all I get for English at school is C's and maybe once a semester, an occasional B. Im not a writer, never liked writing. Love reading though, next best thing to the Internet. Lolz :P

**Pamela** · 11-03-2003, 01:18 PM

I never considered myself that good....and I read a LOT....so your praise was very welcome if unexpected!...I liked your humor....you have a good sense of humor....I enjoy that a lot!

**TNTPaladin** · 11-03-2003, 01:23 PM

Well, I guess I have been called the "class clown" on serveral occasions. I'd rather be a clown then a bully or a weirdo. I just tend to have the urge to make jokes out of everything when I'm around people, especially the opposite sex. Wouldn't you rather make jokes, live your life to the max, then being grumpy and boring. An occasional joke is always good, dont you think?

**Soldier** · 11-03-2003, 01:54 PM

i joke a lot... sometiems one of my friends really gets pissed off and doesnt know that im joking lol

**Pamela** · 11-03-2003, 02:01 PM

*Winks and nods*...I love to joke an play around...it helps to stave off some of the more stressful aspects of life!

**Soldier** · 11-03-2003, 02:06 PM

thats exactly y i do it, well i dont ahve much stress

**TNTPaladin** · 11-03-2003, 02:15 PM

Jeez, i havent noticed, but its already way past 1 am. I should really go to sleep, but I'm having so much fun ^_^.

**Pamela** · 11-03-2003, 02:19 PM

LOL me too!...where do you live?

**TNTPaladin** · 11-03-2003, 02:20 PM

Down under, just about 120km from Spitfire

**Soldier** · 11-03-2003, 02:37 PM

whoa so tahts 2 peolple in Aus and 2 people in florida

**TNTPaladin** · 11-04-2003, 02:23 AM

yup, i guess the world aint so big !

**Pamela** · 11-04-2003, 05:19 AM

lol I guess it isnt!...So can I ask you your age now TNT??

**TNTPaladin** · 11-04-2003, 05:23 AM

heh im turning 16 in two weeks, im a teeny-weeny kid :P

**Pamela** · 11-04-2003, 05:50 AM

:

LOL...How teeny Weeny are we talking?...Spitfire is 6'4!!

**TNTPaladin** · 11-04-2003, 05:52 AM

170cm thats how much in feet?

**Spitfire** · 11-04-2003, 06:08 AM

1 centimeter = 0.032808399 feet
i.e. i'm 195cm

**TNTPaladin** · 11-04-2003, 06:11 AM

guess im 5'6, im short >_<

11-02-2003, 08:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	FEAR/DEATH The day has been long and rife with uncertainty, so Rachael decides to soak away her aches and worries in a long…hot bath. Stopping in the kitchen, on her way thru to the master bath, she reaches in the refrigerator, taking out an ice-cold bottle of very dry wine. Pouring herself a glass, she adds two pieces of dark bitter chocolate to a small plate, then proceeds to her room. Stepping around a corner she begins to fill the tub…when there is a knock at her front door. Rachael is not expecting any friends nor does she have any desire for company at the moment. Deciding to ignore the knocking, she returns to check on the level of her bath water. The sound has somehow changed in the to more of a loud …insistent banging. Suddenly filled with a sense of foreboding……Rachael creeps forward to peer out a small slit in between the curtains…trying to catch a glimpse of this unknown person……………… No one is standing there! Hearing a crash from the rear of the house, Rachael jumps and her heart now seems to be in her throat! Turning back to the front window…having decided to take her chances and leave the house …she screams as a face peers back at her…all teeth and leering eyes! That is when the moaning begins to howl from the kitchen….the sound seeming to move slowly towards her. Panic now seizes her and she dashes for the spare bedroom …hoping to lock herself in….and use the phone to call for help! Slamming the door behind her , Rachael locks the door behind her. Leaning against it she pants and tries to listen to the wailing from outside her door……Then she sees the glow of the yellow eyes! Staring at her with malicious intent…..she now has nowhere to run….no way to hide! Feeling as though she is slipping away.Rachael’s final moments…as Death draws nearer to her, are somewhat random. Filled with the thoughts of what could have been and never was…..her final dying breath whispers to no one…..why???? ((I hope you enjoyed it!)) __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

11-03-2003, 01:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Thank you! I have never thought of doing game stories untill you just mentioned it.I have considered writing...but only recently.Why do you say you dont have that spark??....smiles...Your entry in the other thread was great I thought! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

11-03-2003, 01:18 PM	#5 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	I never considered myself that good....and I read a LOT....so your praise was very welcome if unexpected!...I liked your humor....you have a good sense of humor....I enjoy that a lot! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

11-03-2003, 02:01 PM	#8 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Winks and nods...I love to joke an play around...it helps to stave off some of the more stressful aspects of life! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

11-03-2003, 02:19 PM	#11 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	LOL me too!...where do you live? __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

11-03-2003, 12:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	Wow, great story. I love your descriptive language, it adds that little spark to the story, that I dont seem to have. Ever thought of being a writer ? Or a game storyline writer ?

11-03-2003, 01:15 PM	#4 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	What are you talking about, all I get for English at school is C's and maybe once a semester, an occasional B. Im not a writer, never liked writing. Love reading though, next best thing to the Internet. Lolz :P

11-03-2003, 01:23 PM	#6 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	Well, I guess I have been called the "class clown" on serveral occasions. I'd rather be a clown then a bully or a weirdo. I just tend to have the urge to make jokes out of everything when I'm around people, especially the opposite sex. Wouldn't you rather make jokes, live your life to the max, then being grumpy and boring. An occasional joke is always good, dont you think?

11-03-2003, 01:54 PM	#7 (permalink)
Soldier Status: Forum Elder Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 814 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 7	i joke a lot... sometiems one of my friends really gets pissed off and doesnt know that im joking lol

11-03-2003, 02:06 PM	#9 (permalink)
Soldier Status: Forum Elder Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 814 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 7	thats exactly y i do it, well i dont ahve much stress

11-03-2003, 02:15 PM	#10 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	Jeez, i havent noticed, but its already way past 1 am. I should really go to sleep, but I'm having so much fun ^_^.

11-03-2003, 02:20 PM	#12 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	Down under, just about 120km from Spitfire

11-03-2003, 02:37 PM	#13 (permalink)
Soldier Status: Forum Elder Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 814 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 7	whoa so tahts 2 peolple in Aus and 2 people in florida

11-04-2003, 02:23 AM	#14 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	yup, i guess the world aint so big !

11-04-2003, 05:19 AM	#15 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	lol I guess it isnt!...So can I ask you your age now TNT?? __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

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11-04-2003, 05:23 AM	#16 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	heh im turning 16 in two weeks, im a teeny-weeny kid :P

11-04-2003, 05:50 AM	#17 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	: LOL...How teeny Weeny are we talking?...Spitfire is 6'4!! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

11-04-2003, 05:52 AM	#18 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	170cm thats how much in feet?

11-04-2003, 06:08 AM	#19 (permalink)
Spitfire Status: Founder Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 4,724 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 923 Spent time on board: 1 Week, 2 Days and 12:56:41 Hours Rep Power: 15	1 centimeter = 0.032808399 feet i.e. i'm 195cm

11-04-2003, 06:11 AM	#20 (permalink)
TNTPaladin Status: Byreadingthisuwasted2sec Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Look above you! Posts: 327 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:04:00 Hours Rep Power: 6	guess im 5'6, im short >_<