Stories...all Kinds - Page 4

**Tichondrius_87** · 02-25-2004, 08:24 PM

i'll create a pamela worshipping thread. i swear. and if spit does something really cool/clever/funny, he'll get one too.

ONE RULE: You may not create a worshipping thread for yourself, for it is blasphemy and pride driven.

**Zak** · 02-25-2004, 08:34 PM

Where is Pamela?

**Tichondrius_87** · 02-26-2004, 03:02 PM

she was on yistiday. (that's yesterday for those mardi gras half french folks.) don't know now.. oh wait, i've got a PM. brb

**._| 3 Vv |3** · 02-26-2004, 03:19 PM

Hey you in highschool pamela? you really should look into creative writing courses if your not in them already... you've got some real talent and imagination :) I'd like to consider myself a fantasy writer... the only problem is i can never find the time to finish an entire thought... whenever i find myself inspired... i never have time to do anything about it.. and when i DO have time.... i only got those small fragments of stories..... scenes flashing in my head that would look soo cool if only i could come up with a beginning and an end for the journey! lol... we should start up a story-making thread :) everyone can bounce ideas of one another and we can all make our little quests w/flash! lol! p.s. just wanted to point 1 thing out, *constructive criticism* in the story about the devil slitting everyone's throats *big thumbs up btw!* there's a sentence that says "The devil himself was their captive" ... not sure if that's what you meant... or if you meant "captor" but hey... just a little thing i picked up... minor errors we all make em! gj again

**LordRaven** · 02-27-2004, 12:29 AM

I believe pamela is the oldest person on these forums.... 40. anyways, i think that she meant that, cuz they explain that he was running away from them for some reason or something like that at the end, right?

**Nethran** · 03-02-2004, 04:53 PM

. |3 Vv |3, your new nickname is Habadoo, for I wish to not continue to type that when Im talking to you, you name conjouring schmuck.

Anyway, why dont you write down all your idea that you come up with and keep them in a box, then in a few months you can piece ALL of them together to form a story of great grandure and stuff, and we will all say, "Es Magnifico, Habadoo, es magnifico!"

And then you will be all like "Gee, thanks, I wrote all these ideas down and some of them fit together, and it made a cool story. I owe it all to Kellard, because he's cool, and is my god."

**._| 3 Vv |3** · 03-02-2004, 08:03 PM

well... i suppose if you could actually read you could say it w/o typing it all out. it jewb lol so from now on when you address me just use that.. instead of that habadab-shit thx... :) but if pamela's 40 i'm assuming she's not in highschool creative writing courses v_v i'm 16 1/2... 6 foot 195lbs

lil bigger than pam :P well schools out g2g

**Nethran** · 03-02-2004, 08:08 PM

ITS HABADOO!!! I already made a thread with your name in it, the name Habadoo, and its easy to remember, so you will from now on be called Habadoo. Maybe if my nickname wasnt jewb that would be ok, but my lovers call me jewb, because backwards it spells bwej, and we aaaalllllll know what that means, dont we.

**iXtreme** · 06-03-2004, 04:01 AM

XD!!! wat more can i say?

luv the stories, luv the suspense, ya screw all that GIVE US ZE ENDING XD!!!!

seriously tho we luv ur stories, we luv ur attitude, and hell wee luv u XD

keep it comin pam XD

**Pamela** · 07-17-2004, 02:06 PM

Pamela is an Elf Princess...standing a mere 5 feet tall ....and yet having an elegant almost waif like appearance.Her raven colored hair flows freely down her back to below her waist...and is
interspersed with streaks of midnight blue.Pamela has an ethereal
grace and timeless manner...for she is over 2000 years old..immortal.

You notice first the eyes...when calm they appear to be almost black.
But in acts of conjuring...or anger...they flash over to a bright crimson....and then a dark red.

She wears a simple tunic of dark green ..with embroidered silk edges.
Bearing the emblem of her royalty.Her pants are the softest most supple leather,died dark brown,and her boots are finely fitting and well worn.She carries the *Sword Of The Ages*as well as owning many other fine blades gifted to her over the centuries.She wears the armor of the Queen Of The Elfs...and carries a long bow ..and enchanted arrows.

Pamela is a powerful Mage and has extensive knowledge of magic..She owns a variety of very powerful magic artifacts.
She also commands an army...and trains at a dojo to better her personal fighting skills.

Her manner is to take charge...and she is a relentless opponent when angered.Pamela is a loyal and fierce ally...never leaving her friends in doubt of her being there to protect or defend them!....She is still an enigma...as her past is long and tortured.....
Being an Elvish Princess...she is not easily swayed in matters of the heart....
Pamela chooses her own path...her destiny is in her own hands.......

To say that she is good at heart would be accurate ...as Pamela strives to follow her own sense of honor....and being an immortal and timeless creature...she has had many interesting adventures.....and many fierce battles!...Pamela Is the last of her kind...now she wanders the many lands...ever Questing....

Not really a story...more of a Profile!

:

~~elterion~~ · 07-18-2004, 04:09 PM

Wow you sound hot. I like older ladies *wink wink*

**Pamela** · 07-19-2004, 11:24 AM

LOL...I will keep that in mind sweety *wink wink*

Here is a continuation

*Listen, …as the story of an ancient past spills forth from the Tree.
She sinks further…sitting now with her palms still on the rough bark….and the Tree’s branches wrapped gently around her shoulders.
The message is in images and vague words, becoming increasingly hard to decipher.
Weeping softly, the woman learns that all is not lost...A REBIRTH!..Her mind races..as she struggles to absorb all she has learned. Shaking and terribly afraid…..she is suddenly helpless to move. The Tree falls silent and withdraws her branches, leaving the woman , the chosen, alone and in deep thought. Casting a glance up at this Tree she has served so well, she wipes tears of sadness from her eyes. Standing slowly, caressing the Tree a final time, she turns to walk away.
In her hand she carries a single, perfect seed….given to her by the dying Tree.
Knowing…this is the only way to keep the Dark at bay…safely behind the barrier created from this magical majestic Tree…Feeling vulnerable and quite fragile….she begins what will be her final service…..to be continued.

Hope you like it!

~~Pyrohammie~~ · 10-22-2004, 04:35 AM

pam... really.. no joke with all the gay *** people in the world who like to copy and paste and lie... you should really think about copywriting them... there good... and btw i know this thread is old i just thought id put my opinion in there KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK PAM

**Pamela** · 10-25-2004, 11:46 AM

Thank you !! Continuation...

The woman walks to her silent abode..she carries the future in the palm of her small dellicate hand.She cast a glance about her...suddenly ...fear hits her...she senses a demonic presence! She hides...quietly and still...barely breating....hoping not to draw its evil attention.The Chosen thinks of all the Tree has spoken to her...and tears slide unnoticed from her amber eyes as she crouches in thick folliage.Knowing she must ...MUST do her duty...she waits for the demon to pass.At last ..after many minutes...she arises...stretching cramped mucsles...she continues to where she lives with 10 other chosen.The woman opens the door and gasps in horror!! DEAD...all of them...she sways and suddenly gets ill. Her friends...all of the rest...slaughtered!The woman sobbs...and runs from the room.....knowing the time has come...she seeks out a Druid....for she is now alone in this quest....the Tree is dying...her other Chosen are dead.....she MUST go to The Valley Of Sorrows...and find its magic for the Rebirth of the Tree she has served !Weeping softly...she collects the few things she will need for her journey....wrapping her cloak tightly about her...she begins...

to be continued...

**Aemaeth** · 10-26-2004, 06:19 PM

Very nice pam, do you think you could do some a bit longer, as those are xcellent, i wouldnt mind reading a lot more stories that you have done, i tried short stories once, not my thing. Me be dyslexic and all. to much proof reading

~~Pyrohammie~~ · 11-09-2004, 01:31 AM

man pam.. i like your word choice and diction.. ALOT... i would post one of mine but its like ... 32 and a half writen pages so i dont think it woudl fit..

**Pamela** · 11-09-2004, 04:17 AM

Thank you!! What you should do Is post then in instalments...I would be very interested in the stories you are writing....that is really the purpose of the thread! I promise a continuation soon!

**P.I.M.P** · 12-12-2004, 06:03 AM

wow pam ur stories r great mine r not near as good as yours, but if u want to check them out, go to the thread meh stories

**Pamela** · 12-12-2004, 01:45 PM

I will!! I see so much talent on this forum...you guys sometimes do not give yourselves enough credit for how very good you are!!

**Demon(Tree)** · 01-13-2005, 08:14 AM

wow great jog on the storys they are very good
for me i am a soccer guy so i dont write but reading is ok
you should make a short story book thing with your storys
make lots of money and fans
become really famous that would be great
i would by those books
good job

i am just a soccer guy:

03-02-2004, 04:53 PM	#66 (permalink)
Nethran Status: Attempter of Things Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Aloft in a balloon of cheese. Posts: 1,535 Credits: 344 Spent time on board: 5 Days and 4:22:34 Hours Rep Power: 8	. \|3 Vv \|3, your new nickname is Habadoo, for I wish to not continue to type that when Im talking to you, you name conjouring schmuck. Anyway, why dont you write down all your idea that you come up with and keep them in a box, then in a few months you can piece ALL of them together to form a story of great grandure and stuff, and we will all say, "Es Magnifico, Habadoo, es magnifico!" And then you will be all like "Gee, thanks, I wrote all these ideas down and some of them fit together, and it made a cool story. I owe it all to Kellard, because he's cool, and is my god." __________________

03-02-2004, 08:08 PM	#68 (permalink)
Nethran Status: Attempter of Things Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Aloft in a balloon of cheese. Posts: 1,535 Credits: 344 Spent time on board: 5 Days and 4:22:34 Hours Rep Power: 8	ITS HABADOO!!! I already made a thread with your name in it, the name Habadoo, and its easy to remember, so you will from now on be called Habadoo. Maybe if my nickname wasnt jewb that would be ok, but my lovers call me jewb, because backwards it spells bwej, and we aaaalllllll know what that means, dont we. __________________

07-17-2004, 02:06 PM	#70 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Pamela is an Elf Princess...standing a mere 5 feet tall ....and yet having an elegant almost waif like appearance.Her raven colored hair flows freely down her back to below her waist...and is interspersed with streaks of midnight blue.Pamela has an ethereal grace and timeless manner...for she is over 2000 years old..immortal. You notice first the eyes...when calm they appear to be almost black. But in acts of conjuring...or anger...they flash over to a bright crimson....and then a dark red. She wears a simple tunic of dark green ..with embroidered silk edges. Bearing the emblem of her royalty.Her pants are the softest most supple leather,died dark brown,and her boots are finely fitting and well worn.She carries the Sword Of The Agesas well as owning many other fine blades gifted to her over the centuries.She wears the armor of the Queen Of The Elfs...and carries a long bow ..and enchanted arrows. Pamela is a powerful Mage and has extensive knowledge of magic..She owns a variety of very powerful magic artifacts. She also commands an army...and trains at a dojo to better her personal fighting skills. Her manner is to take charge...and she is a relentless opponent when angered.Pamela is a loyal and fierce ally...never leaving her friends in doubt of her being there to protect or defend them!....She is still an enigma...as her past is long and tortured..... Being an Elvish Princess...she is not easily swayed in matters of the heart.... Pamela chooses her own path...her destiny is in her own hands....... To say that she is good at heart would be accurate ...as Pamela strives to follow her own sense of honor....and being an immortal and timeless creature...she has had many interesting adventures.....and many fierce battles!...Pamela Is the last of her kind...now she wanders the many lands...ever Questing.... Not really a story...more of a Profile!: __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

07-19-2004, 11:24 AM	#72 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	LOL...I will keep that in mind sweety wink wink Here is a continuation *Listen, …as the story of an ancient past spills forth from the Tree. She sinks further…sitting now with her palms still on the rough bark….and the Tree’s branches wrapped gently around her shoulders. The message is in images and vague words, becoming increasingly hard to decipher. Weeping softly, the woman learns that all is not lost...A REBIRTH!..Her mind races..as she struggles to absorb all she has learned. Shaking and terribly afraid…..she is suddenly helpless to move. The Tree falls silent and withdraws her branches, leaving the woman , the chosen, alone and in deep thought. Casting a glance up at this Tree she has served so well, she wipes tears of sadness from her eyes. Standing slowly, caressing the Tree a final time, she turns to walk away. In her hand she carries a single, perfect seed….given to her by the dying Tree. Knowing…this is the only way to keep the Dark at bay…safely behind the barrier created from this magical majestic Tree…Feeling vulnerable and quite fragile….she begins what will be her final service…..to be continued. Hope you like it! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

10-25-2004, 11:46 AM	#74 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Thank you !! Continuation... The woman walks to her silent abode..she carries the future in the palm of her small dellicate hand.She cast a glance about her...suddenly ...fear hits her...she senses a demonic presence! She hides...quietly and still...barely breating....hoping not to draw its evil attention.The Chosen thinks of all the Tree has spoken to her...and tears slide unnoticed from her amber eyes as she crouches in thick folliage.Knowing she must ...MUST do her duty...she waits for the demon to pass.At last ..after many minutes...she arises...stretching cramped mucsles...she continues to where she lives with 10 other chosen.The woman opens the door and gasps in horror!! DEAD...all of them...she sways and suddenly gets ill. Her friends...all of the rest...slaughtered!The woman sobbs...and runs from the room.....knowing the time has come...she seeks out a Druid....for she is now alone in this quest....the Tree is dying...her other Chosen are dead.....she MUST go to The Valley Of Sorrows...and find its magic for the Rebirth of the Tree she has served !Weeping softly...she collects the few things she will need for her journey....wrapping her cloak tightly about her...she begins... to be continued... __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

02-25-2004, 08:24 PM	#61 (permalink)
Tichondrius_87 Status: Forum Elder Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In a dorm room that I live in. Posts: 892 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 6	i'll create a pamela worshipping thread. i swear. and if spit does something really cool/clever/funny, he'll get one too. ONE RULE: You may not create a worshipping thread for yourself, for it is blasphemy and pride driven.

02-25-2004, 08:34 PM	#62 (permalink)
Zak Status: Forum Elder Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: South Park Posts: 708 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 6	Where is Pamela?

02-26-2004, 03:02 PM	#63 (permalink)
Tichondrius_87 Status: Forum Elder Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: In a dorm room that I live in. Posts: 892 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 6	she was on yistiday. (that's yesterday for those mardi gras half french folks.) don't know now.. oh wait, i've got a PM. brb

02-26-2004, 03:19 PM	#64 (permalink)
._\| 3 Vv \|3 Status: †\|-\|3 L337 \|¤VvÑ3\|2 Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 780 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:08:49 Hours Rep Power: 6	Hey you in highschool pamela? you really should look into creative writing courses if your not in them already... you've got some real talent and imagination :) I'd like to consider myself a fantasy writer... the only problem is i can never find the time to finish an entire thought... whenever i find myself inspired... i never have time to do anything about it.. and when i DO have time.... i only got those small fragments of stories..... scenes flashing in my head that would look soo cool if only i could come up with a beginning and an end for the journey! lol... we should start up a story-making thread :) everyone can bounce ideas of one another and we can all make our little quests w/flash! lol! p.s. just wanted to point 1 thing out, constructive criticism in the story about the devil slitting everyone's throats big thumbs up btw! there's a sentence that says "The devil himself was their captive" ... not sure if that's what you meant... or if you meant "captor" but hey... just a little thing i picked up... minor errors we all make em! gj again

02-27-2004, 12:29 AM	#65 (permalink)
LordRaven Status: Veteran Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: California Posts: 107 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 5	I believe pamela is the oldest person on these forums.... 40. anyways, i think that she meant that, cuz they explain that he was running away from them for some reason or something like that at the end, right?

03-02-2004, 08:03 PM	#67 (permalink)
._\| 3 Vv \|3 Status: †\|-\|3 L337 \|¤VvÑ3\|2 Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 780 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:08:49 Hours Rep Power: 6	well... i suppose if you could actually read you could say it w/o typing it all out. it jewb lol so from now on when you address me just use that.. instead of that habadab-shit thx... :) but if pamela's 40 i'm assuming she's not in highschool creative writing courses v_v i'm 16 1/2... 6 foot 195lbs lil bigger than pam :P well schools out g2g

06-03-2004, 04:01 AM	#69 (permalink)
iXtreme Status: Veteran Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 156 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 5	XD!!! wat more can i say? luv the stories, luv the suspense, ya screw all that GIVE US ZE ENDING XD!!!! seriously tho we luv ur stories, we luv ur attitude, and hell wee luv u XD keep it comin pam XD

07-18-2004, 04:09 PM	#71 (permalink)
~~elterion~~ Status: Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Manitoba, Canada Posts: 1,709 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 0	Wow you sound hot. I like older ladies wink wink

10-22-2004, 04:35 AM	#73 (permalink)
~~Pyrohammie~~ Status: Banned Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 317 Credits: 10 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 0	pam... really.. no joke with all the gay *** people in the world who like to copy and paste and lie... you should really think about copywriting them... there good... and btw i know this thread is old i just thought id put my opinion in there KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK PAM

10-26-2004, 06:19 PM	#75 (permalink)
Aemaeth Status: KRANK IT UP. Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 3,469 Credits: 235 Spent time on board: 1 Week, 2 Days and 12:00:48 Hours Rep Power: 11	Very nice pam, do you think you could do some a bit longer, as those are xcellent, i wouldnt mind reading a lot more stories that you have done, i tried short stories once, not my thing. Me be dyslexic and all. to much proof reading __________________

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11-09-2004, 01:31 AM	#76 (permalink)
~~Pyrohammie~~ Status: Banned Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 317 Credits: 10 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 0	man pam.. i like your word choice and diction.. ALOT... i would post one of mine but its like ... 32 and a half writen pages so i dont think it woudl fit..

11-09-2004, 04:17 AM	#77 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Thank you!! What you should do Is post then in instalments...I would be very interested in the stories you are writing....that is really the purpose of the thread! I promise a continuation soon! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

12-12-2004, 06:03 AM	#78 (permalink)
P.I.M.P Status: Forum Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: oregon Posts: 67 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 4	wow pam ur stories r great mine r not near as good as yours, but if u want to check them out, go to the thread meh stories

12-12-2004, 01:45 PM	#79 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	I will!! I see so much talent on this forum...you guys sometimes do not give yourselves enough credit for how very good you are!! __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

01-13-2005, 08:14 AM	#80 (permalink)
Demon(Tree) Status: Forum Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Yoshi Fan Club Posts: 81 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 4	wow great jog on the storys they are very good for me i am a soccer guy so i dont write but reading is ok you should make a short story book thing with your storys make lots of money and fans become really famous that would be great i would by those books good job i am just a soccer guy: