S.u.m.m.e.r I.n.o.c.e.n.c.e - Blizzard Sector

Cr187 · 06-23-2007, 01:32 AM

To the lake
Just down the block
The geese are there
In tiny flocks

And soccer balls
In the hot summer sun
The sweat is rolling
Off of everyone

And those sweet dreams
And their nightmares
Of ghosts long dead
And flawless flair

With heartfelt wants
Of what we never need
Times when air was thin
And we couldn't breath

The dogs were crying
To the dying moon
The daylight coming
In sweet solitude

And those sweet dreams
And their nightmares
Of ghosts long dead
And flawless flair

With heartfelt wants
Of what we never need
Times when air was thin
And we couldn't breath

And those demons eyes
In the dark ash trees
Just an owl's 'hoot'
And they ceased to be...

**Pamela** · 06-26-2007, 04:25 AM

Very nice! I really enjoyed this one...it struck a note of nostalgia and strangely a level of remorse in me.

It flowed well and was very good.

**hellsing293** · 06-27-2007, 07:04 PM

"Innocence" has two 'n's

halomaster2437 · 06-30-2007, 09:45 AM

Hmm very nice, I have no talent at all, you seem like you should be a writer! or if you are one then good job!

It really touched me in my heart feeling everything you typed.

06-26-2007, 04:25 AM	#2 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Very nice! I really enjoyed this one...it struck a note of nostalgia and strangely a level of remorse in me. It flowed well and was very good. __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

06-27-2007, 07:04 PM	#3 (permalink)
hellsing293 Status: Common Sense Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Rhode Island Posts: 2,654 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 316 Spent time on board: 5 Days and 2:33:16 Hours Rep Power: 9	"Innocence" has two 'n's __________________ As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....

06-30-2007, 09:45 AM	#4 (permalink)
halomaster2437 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 12 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 1:10:58 Hours Rep Power: 2	Hmm very nice, I have no talent at all, you seem like you should be a writer! or if you are one then good job! It really touched me in my heart feeling everything you typed. Last edited by halomaster2437; 06-30-2007 at 09:46 AM.. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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06-23-2007, 01:32 AM	#1 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 150 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	To the lake Just down the block The geese are there In tiny flocks And soccer balls In the hot summer sun The sweat is rolling Off of everyone And those sweet dreams And their nightmares Of ghosts long dead And flawless flair With heartfelt wants Of what we never need Times when air was thin And we couldn't breath The dogs were crying To the dying moon The daylight coming In sweet solitude And those sweet dreams And their nightmares Of ghosts long dead And flawless flair With heartfelt wants Of what we never need Times when air was thin And we couldn't breath And those demons eyes In the dark ash trees Just an owl's 'hoot' And they ceased to be...