04-26-2007, 03:00 AM
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  Status: Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Eugene, Oregon
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Credits: 189 Spent time on board: 3 Days and 4:42:33 Hours Rep Power: 3     | I'm not so sure about this one. I wrote it as it came to me, so it may not flow well. Rain Holding my soul inside. I sit in the rain and do noting but cry and wait for her grace. She woke me once lost in that winter so deep. Where is she now have I finally pushed her away. I am a fool. For moving to fast and pushing to hard but I will stay. I sit in the rain prying for her so she may love once again... anyone. I need her to be happy. Even if I am not. Her smile wake's my soul. Even if it is for another.... Last edited by Frai7ty; 05-03-2007 at 09:05 AM.. Reason: Spelling nd Gramer |
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05-03-2007, 09:03 AM
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  Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida
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Credits: 382 Spent time on board: Days and :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16 | It is a good poem simply because of the impact of the emotions it evokes. I see longing and pain,but also love and hope.It speaks not only of where your heart is,but why.Very nice. I am pretty sure I have posted my published poems,but if you would like I can re-post some.
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05-03-2007, 09:08 AM
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| Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida
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