She Was

Cr187 · 12-23-2006, 03:04 AM

She was a prodigy
the day she
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn

Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed

I'm so sorry,
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye

She was the first one lost,
a damaging cost,
to pay
I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
that day

But she's already gone,
and I'm crying alone,
at her grave
Her eyes haunt me,
an endless sea,
to brave

I'm so sorry,
forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye

Your angel's gone,
she's not coming home,
plese don't cry
It's not your fault
that the child was lost,
it's all mine

I wish I could go back,
do all I should have,
what a twisted fate
She's already gone,
and it's all my fault,
I was just too late

I'm so sorry forgive me,
I was just too late
That child's gone,
she won't be home,
a twisted fate
Your angel's flown,
her wings have grown,
she had to die
A twisted fate,
and my heart aches,
to say good-bye

She was a prodigy
the day she,
was born
Her soul was free,
nobody could see,
a future forlorn

Her mother's tears,
her father's fears,
they didn't exist
Her perfect smile,
that glorious child,
would soon be missed

She was----

**Pamela** · 12-23-2006, 03:17 AM

Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.

**eskimo** · 12-23-2006, 03:22 AM

very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.

Cr187 · 12-23-2006, 03:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pamela

Very nice.
Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences?
Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them.

Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol.

Quote:

Originally Posted by eskimo

very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep.

Thanks, I'm glad you thought it was deep and that it was good enough to score that high, lol.

**Pamela** · 12-23-2006, 04:33 PM

LOL My bad! I am sorry about that.

Quote:Cr187
Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol

Cr187 · 12-23-2006, 10:09 PM

[quote=Pamela;398014]LOL My bad! I am sorry about that.

it's cool, happens everyday, lol, jk jk

12-23-2006, 03:04 AM	#1 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	She was a prodigy the day she was born Her soul was free, nobody could see, a future forlorn Her mother's tears, her father's fears, they didn't exist Her perfect smile, that glorious child, would soon be missed I'm so sorry, forgive me, I was just too late That child's gone, she won't be home, a twisted fate Your angel's flown, her wings have grown, she had to die A twisted fate, and my heart aches, to say good-bye She was the first one lost, a damaging cost, to pay I wish I could go back, do all I should have, that day But she's already gone, and I'm crying alone, at her grave Her eyes haunt me, an endless sea, to brave I'm so sorry, forgive me, I was just too late That child's gone, she won't be home, a twisted fate Your angel's flown, her wings have grown, she had to die A twisted fate, and my heart aches, to say good-bye Your angel's gone, she's not coming home, plese don't cry It's not your fault that the child was lost, it's all mine I wish I could go back, do all I should have, what a twisted fate She's already gone, and it's all my fault, I was just too late I'm so sorry forgive me, I was just too late That child's gone, she won't be home, a twisted fate Your angel's flown, her wings have grown, she had to die A twisted fate, and my heart aches, to say good-bye She was a prodigy the day she, was born Her soul was free, nobody could see, a future forlorn Her mother's tears, her father's fears, they didn't exist Her perfect smile, that glorious child, would soon be missed She was---- Last edited by Cr187; 12-23-2006 at 03:08 AM.

12-23-2006, 03:17 AM	#2 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Very nice. Might I ask if this poem was a product of real life experiences? Either way it is haunting and emotional. A very good work indeed sir,please keep posting them. __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

12-23-2006, 03:22 AM	#3 (permalink)
eskimo Status: Veteran Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In Da Sky....Watching Posts: 167 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:22:32 Hours Rep Power: 3	very good i give it a 9/10 it seem's very deep. __________________ Demonicfury @ Jsp.

12-23-2006, 04:33 PM	#5 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,274 Credits: 297 Spent time on board: :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	LOL My bad! I am sorry about that. Quote:Cr187 Thanks, but no, it was just an idea I had for a song. I'm a girl by the way, lol __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

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12-23-2006, 10:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	[quote=Pamela;398014]LOL My bad! I am sorry about that. it's cool, happens everyday, lol, jk jk