Peom: I Love You So - Blizzard Sector

**Frai7ty** · 10-17-2006, 08:14 AM

Life is a fleeting thing.
Only joy until pain.
I ask you one last dance.
I ask you to smile one last time.

This depression so deep.
Like a void ever growing.
Only joy you have brought to me.
Now uncertainty lays ahead.

This is your winter.
Only pain.
Lets hope it will be quick.
Lets hope your spring, again starts soon.

I only wish for you to find your love.
For you to find your true and only joy.
Just to have your wish’s.
For you to stay Alive.

I leave you now, in my deepest pain.
I hope never again I feel this depression.
I love you so.
I love you so.

**Pamela** · 10-24-2006, 08:57 PM

Very nice prose! Great emotional usage of words.

Cr187 · 10-25-2006, 02:03 AM

Pretty, great write.

**Frai7ty** · 10-25-2006, 04:14 AM

Thank's to you both. I appreciate the sentament.

10-17-2006, 08:14 AM	#1 (permalink)
Frai7ty Status: Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Eugene, Oregon Posts: 424 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 189 Spent time on board: 3 Days and 4:42:33 Hours Rep Power: 3	Life is a fleeting thing. Only joy until pain. I ask you one last dance. I ask you to smile one last time. This depression so deep. Like a void ever growing. Only joy you have brought to me. Now uncertainty lays ahead. This is your winter. Only pain. Lets hope it will be quick. Lets hope your spring, again starts soon. I only wish for you to find your love. For you to find your true and only joy. Just to have your wish’s. For you to stay Alive. I leave you now, in my deepest pain. I hope never again I feel this depression. I love you so. I love you so. __________________ Guide to Computer Themes

10-24-2006, 08:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
Pamela Status: A Light in your Darkness Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Florida Posts: 5,318 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 382 Spent time on board: Days and :0:0 Hours Rep Power: 16	Very nice prose! Great emotional usage of words. __________________ A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning!!

10-25-2006, 04:14 AM	#4 (permalink)
Frai7ty Status: Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Eugene, Oregon Posts: 424 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 189 Spent time on board: 3 Days and 4:42:33 Hours Rep Power: 3	Thank's to you both. I appreciate the sentament. __________________ Guide to Computer Themes

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10-25-2006, 02:03 AM	#3 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 150 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	Pretty, great write.