Poem: Change (Dedicated to 9/11)

Cr187 · 09-12-2006, 02:30 AM

She walked towards the graveyard of so many lost souls
Was there enough room in heaven, or was there no place left to go?
And there were men working, building two more towers for the world
But all that she could think of was her innocent little girl

In her hands were the roses, her daughters favorite scent
And she cried because she hasn't heard her voice ever since
Ever since the day of nine eleven, the day when her heart died
It was her sadness that lived forever, crystal tears that she cried

The war was so confusing, the blood lust that never seemed to rest
But they're doing all they can, and she can't blame the President
But sometimes she wonders, what if her nation never fell
Never learned the power of sadness, never felt the flames of hell?

In her hands were the roses, her daughters favorite scent
And she cried because she hasn't heard her voice ever since
Ever since the day of nine eleven, the day when her life changed
The day that will stand forever, because nothing will be the same

It's been five years since she's seen her, since she's heard her daughter laugh
She knows that it's wistful thinking to think that she's coming back
But it's all that keeps her living, it keeps her from the pain
It keeps her from knowing that this world would never change...

PoTatoes · 09-12-2006, 03:39 AM

nice. you should submit it to like nbc or something..really nice

Cr187 · 09-14-2006, 09:10 PM

Thank you.

**Fang21** · 09-14-2006, 09:11 PM

That Was A Awsome Poem Im Speachless.

**Darkemperor121** · 09-14-2006, 09:27 PM

very very good 15 out of 10!!!

**Fang21** · 09-14-2006, 09:28 PM

hey i give him/her a 100 out of 10

09-14-2006, 09:27 PM	#5 (permalink)
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09-12-2006, 02:30 AM	#1 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	She walked towards the graveyard of so many lost souls Was there enough room in heaven, or was there no place left to go? And there were men working, building two more towers for the world But all that she could think of was her innocent little girl In her hands were the roses, her daughters favorite scent And she cried because she hasn't heard her voice ever since Ever since the day of nine eleven, the day when her heart died It was her sadness that lived forever, crystal tears that she cried The war was so confusing, the blood lust that never seemed to rest But they're doing all they can, and she can't blame the President But sometimes she wonders, what if her nation never fell Never learned the power of sadness, never felt the flames of hell? In her hands were the roses, her daughters favorite scent And she cried because she hasn't heard her voice ever since Ever since the day of nine eleven, the day when her life changed The day that will stand forever, because nothing will be the same It's been five years since she's seen her, since she's heard her daughter laugh She knows that it's wistful thinking to think that she's coming back But it's all that keeps her living, it keeps her from the pain It keeps her from knowing that this world would never change...

09-12-2006, 03:39 AM	#2 (permalink)
PoTatoes Status: Newcomer Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Arcasia Posts: 1,915 Credits: 41 Spent time on board: 17:46:30 Hours Rep Power: 6	nice. you should submit it to like nbc or something..really nice

09-14-2006, 09:10 PM	#3 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Credits: 100 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	Thank you.

09-14-2006, 09:11 PM	#4 (permalink)
Fang21 Status: Forum Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Lake Norman,Nc Posts: 69 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:08:25 Hours Rep Power: 3	That Was A Awsome Poem Im Speachless.

09-14-2006, 09:28 PM	#6 (permalink)
Fang21 Status: Forum Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Lake Norman,Nc Posts: 69 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:08:25 Hours Rep Power: 3	hey i give him/her a 100 out of 10