Poem: Another Newspaper Clipping - Blizzard Sector

Cr187 · 09-08-2006, 11:11 PM

I wish I was younger, not bothered by the world
Just one more naive child, an ignorant little girl
What would have happened if I never knew of war?
Never learned of death, and never knew what we're fighting for?

Would this world be a better place if there was only peace?
Where everyone got along, and everyone agreed?
Or does there need to be a battle to make the truth be known?
For justice to be won, for honor within your home?

It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life
A life that is now lost through the bombings in the night
It's just another newspaper clipping, a story of a child lost
The story of the dying parents, losing the only child that they've got

It's another newspaper clipping

I remember the day it happened, the day of nine eleven
The day when so many innocent souls departed and went to heaven
Was there enough room in heaven for all those souls?
Or was heaven full, and they had no place left to go?

Would this world be better if humans were never born
If Adam and Eve had never broken the promise they swore?
Would this world be better if nobody knew of war?
If they actually knew the reason that they were fighting for?

It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life
A life that is now lost through the bombings in the night
It's just another newspaper clipping, a story of a child lost
The story of the dying parents, losing the only child they got

It's another newspaper clipping

Another newspaper clipping tells the story of her death
The story of an innocent, breathing her last breath
Another newspaper clipping breaks the heart of a family's hope
Telling them that their son is dead, and he won't be coming home

It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life
A life that should still exist, still knowing everything's alright
It's another newspaper clipping, the story about a child lost
And the parents dying for her, knowing that her life has stopped...

**Frai7ty** · 09-09-2006, 02:55 AM

Humm, I must think on this one. Good job. Have you posted this in other places? It sound familer.

Cr187 · 09-09-2006, 03:52 AM

Um, I've posted this at AllPoetry.com and I'm Cr187 over there, too. So maybe you've read it there? I dunno, lol.

**Frai7ty** · 09-09-2006, 04:46 AM

That's it. :)

Cr187 · 09-09-2006, 01:40 PM

Awesome, a fellow Allpoet.

**schmidz** · 09-14-2006, 03:09 AM

Nice nice nice... i like the part where you said

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cr187

I wish I was younger, not bothered by the world

Just one more naive child, an ignorant little girl

Freshmen...

Did u want rating?

Cr187 · 09-14-2006, 09:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by schmidz

Nice nice nice... i like the part where you said

Freshmen...

Did u want rating?

Thanks and sure.

**Fang21** · 09-14-2006, 09:39 PM

nicely done that is a good poem im not very good with literature and writing ,yu did a great job

**Darkemperor121** · 09-14-2006, 10:29 PM

youre a very good writer :)

**Fang21** · 09-14-2006, 10:31 PM

yea the one she wrote on 9/11 was a great one also i wish i were that talented

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Frai7ty Status: Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Eugene, Oregon Posts: 424 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 189 Spent time on board: 3 Days and 4:42:33 Hours Rep Power: 3	Humm, I must think on this one. Good job. Have you posted this in other places? It sound familer. __________________ Guide to Computer Themes

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09-08-2006, 11:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 150 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	I wish I was younger, not bothered by the world Just one more naive child, an ignorant little girl What would have happened if I never knew of war? Never learned of death, and never knew what we're fighting for? Would this world be a better place if there was only peace? Where everyone got along, and everyone agreed? Or does there need to be a battle to make the truth be known? For justice to be won, for honor within your home? It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life A life that is now lost through the bombings in the night It's just another newspaper clipping, a story of a child lost The story of the dying parents, losing the only child that they've got It's another newspaper clipping I remember the day it happened, the day of nine eleven The day when so many innocent souls departed and went to heaven Was there enough room in heaven for all those souls? Or was heaven full, and they had no place left to go? Would this world be better if humans were never born If Adam and Eve had never broken the promise they swore? Would this world be better if nobody knew of war? If they actually knew the reason that they were fighting for? It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life A life that is now lost through the bombings in the night It's just another newspaper clipping, a story of a child lost The story of the dying parents, losing the only child they got It's another newspaper clipping Another newspaper clipping tells the story of her death The story of an innocent, breathing her last breath Another newspaper clipping breaks the heart of a family's hope Telling them that their son is dead, and he won't be coming home It's another newspaper clipping, another story about a life A life that should still exist, still knowing everything's alright It's another newspaper clipping, the story about a child lost And the parents dying for her, knowing that her life has stopped...

09-09-2006, 03:52 AM	#3 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 150 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	Um, I've posted this at AllPoetry.com and I'm Cr187 over there, too. So maybe you've read it there? I dunno, lol.

09-09-2006, 01:40 PM	#5 (permalink)
Cr187 Status: Newcomer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Green Bay Posts: 47 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 150 Spent time on board: 0:22:14 Hours Rep Power: 3	Awesome, a fellow Allpoet.

09-14-2006, 09:39 PM	#8 (permalink)
Fang21 Status: Forum Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Lake Norman,Nc Posts: 69 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:08:25 Hours Rep Power: 3	nicely done that is a good poem im not very good with literature and writing ,yu did a great job

09-14-2006, 10:31 PM	#10 (permalink)
Fang21 Status: Forum Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Lake Norman,Nc Posts: 69 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: 0:08:25 Hours Rep Power: 3	yea the one she wrote on 9/11 was a great one also i wish i were that talented