Poem: Done

**Zerotull** · **Poem: Done -** 07-24-2006, 06:08 PM

Not written by me but by my best friend. Just wanted to share cause i love it :).

How can I life with this pain?
With this all time curse for ****ing things up?

Now I’m finally starting to realize
That all of this is in vain.

Every time I open my mouth everything turns to shit
I thought people cared, but they never did and never will

Now hopefully I can be alone,
Slowly feeling my heart turn to stone.

I thought I knew who I was
Clearly all of that was a dream

I’m tired of all this shit
Everything I did

It’s finally over now,
I’m done with me…

**slimp** · 07-24-2006, 06:36 PM

your friend is EMO and I don't like him/her, because he/she cries about his/her pain, and he/she probrably doesn't have much.

crybabies annoy me. OMG I'm GONNA COMMIT SUICIDE.

that wasn't flaming, just my opinion. I guess if I was a suicidal homo I might like that poem too.

**hellsing293** · 07-25-2006, 01:43 AM

i kept scrolling past and kept seeing this thread so i finally decided to look. i had to comment. yeah no offence, but your friends emo.

**Zerotull** · 07-25-2006, 02:59 AM

I wonder if any of you guys have any respect for people @ all.

**Pamela** · 07-25-2006, 04:50 PM

The poem itself shows a lot of emotions,and implies some experience that caused them no small amount of distress.Being emotional is not a bad thing guys,and expressing it in a written form is often healing in and of itself.
Many things can inspire poetry in individuals,the full gambit of emotions,joy,pain,hate,love,loss,beauty,fear....ke ep in mind that the written verse is an expression from the writer and whether or not you care for their works....they took the time and effort to put thoughts,feelings,and emotion down in writing.
Just my 2 cents...