Rhyme City - Blizzard Sector

**Dynafrom** · 07-20-2006, 07:27 AM

Heres a poem I made, or better yet a rhyme heh ENJOY!\

Old Man Dead At Opera

The light of the morning
Old man snoring
Yet the dream was mourning
Pain was searing
As the end was nearing
Through it all was a clearing,
Like a peering
Many family fearing
The ugly face of death rearing
Thinking before the hearing
The fat lady singing.

**Arc** · 07-20-2006, 08:04 AM

lol not bad, kinda sounds like a continuation to 'its raining its pouring to me'

**Dynafrom** · 07-20-2006, 01:50 PM

For you guys who don't understand the poem, he died at the opera listining to some fat ass.

**Lynch** · 07-20-2006, 03:28 PM

Heh, not bad. 7/10

~Lynch~

07-20-2006, 07:27 AM	#1 (permalink)
Dynafrom Status: The Immortals Join Date: May 2004 Location: Markham, ONT Posts: 3,549 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 15 Spent time on board: 0:34:09 Hours Rep Power: 12	Heres a poem I made, or better yet a rhyme heh ENJOY!\ Old Man Dead At Opera The light of the morning Old man snoring Yet the dream was mourning Pain was searing As the end was nearing Through it all was a clearing, Like a peering Many family fearing The ugly face of death rearing Thinking before the hearing The fat lady singing. Last edited by Dynafrom; 07-21-2006 at 04:59 AM..

07-20-2006, 08:04 AM	#2 (permalink)
Arc Status: Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,545 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 181 Spent time on board: 2 Days and 3:27:42 Hours Rep Power: 6	lol not bad, kinda sounds like a continuation to 'its raining its pouring to me' __________________

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07-20-2006, 01:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
Dynafrom Status: The Immortals Join Date: May 2004 Location: Markham, ONT Posts: 3,549 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 15 Spent time on board: 0:34:09 Hours Rep Power: 12	For you guys who don't understand the poem, he died at the opera listining to some fat ass.

07-20-2006, 03:28 PM	#4 (permalink)
Lynch Status: Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Troy, MO Posts: 141 Tournaments Joined: 0 Tournament Wins: 0 Credits: 0 Spent time on board: - Rep Power: 3	Heh, not bad. 7/10 ~Lynch~