Okay this is how it will go i will start a story..people will continue it...and mods if i ask a post to be deleted please to so i dont want....

I love cheese..when it has nothing to do with the story..hopefully this gets popular and we get a story at the end i will combine all the threads and hopefully we will have us a story :) here it goes keep limited to a paragraph....


The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

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Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......

BY THE WAY! TO ANYONE READING THIS, GO TO THE LAST POST, BECAUSE IT CONTAINS ALL OF THE POSTS PREVIOUS TO IT




The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maika chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maika was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maika solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maika, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maika, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maika before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

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Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"

(when are we gonna stop copy-pasting the previous story?)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

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Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
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Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

(Keep doing what you are doing..its working great.)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
______________________________
Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

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Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!

(it only works great because you tell good plot developing twists)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

__________________
Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
__________________
Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

__________________

Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
__________________
Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

__________________

With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
______________
Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

______________

Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
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Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

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Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
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Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

(Hah thanks but keep it like this i think this is awesome we have a story devoloping)
The Story

There was a story....


Young renshi wanted to become the most noble shinobi in town but he had to prove himself first. He couldnt just call himself the next gratest. He would endure test that were never accomplished but by one. The greatest Shinobi Alive. This will be young renshi's trainer...support manage....FATHER! To become the next shinobi the world would know renshi had to learn the 1000th element attack. The greatest attack combining all elemements of life...world...Everything in exsitense. This attack could devistate the world if not used wisley by the one...the only.........<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

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Maika...The Master and renown teacher...only he could train Renshi thru all the difficult task and abilities he would need to attain his goal of greatest Shinobi.
But Maiki had not taken a student in many years...his life had been violent and his power deadly in its magnitude.Seeking seclusion from the world he had built a cabin for himself and lived miles away from town.Young Renshi was determined,however and walked the 10 miles to where Maiki lived and humbly presented himself.......
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Maiki chuckled softly to himself as he looked up the newcomer. "What do you mean by this, young one, coming to me for help?" He growled it at the boy as the boy stood there, clearly very afraid of him. Just as he should be, he thought to himself. Not to toot my own horn, or anything, but i am one commanding guy. "Please, master, I want to be like you. Can you teach me your ways?" The boy's voice was small, and thin, and it quavered on the last word, making him seem even more feeble. "Yes, i can teach you my ways. But the real question is, can you learn them?"

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Renshi answers harsly with confidence. Yes! I will and i can learn from you. I will dedicate my time to being the next greatest Shinobi. Renshi though did not understand what he was in for exactly. This year of training would be the hardest thing of his life!
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Maiki was slightly disquieted by this sudden show of confidence. He had guessed the child to be little over 15, but it seemed now that he had grown inches and years before his very eyes. "Very well. Show me what you can do, and I will know where to start my teaching. Do your worst." He spread his legs a little and slid into the comfortable fighting pose that he had come to know and love. He beckoned slowly with his index finger and prepared for the hardest fight of his life.

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With a sudden blast from renshi's palm a huge burst of energy fired directly at maiki. There was a sudden cloud of dust and no sign of maiki. From out of no where renshi is on his hands and knees with a ancient dagger at the back of his neck. "You have much to learn but that wasnt all that bad, You have potential...Here is where the training STARTS!
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Renshi slowly collapsed forward onto the ground face first, and died when he hit the ground. Maiki solemnly dusted his hands off, walked over to Renshi, and pulled the dagger out of his neck. Suddenly, Renshi rose from the ground and stood in front of Maiki, brushing his tunic and pants off, before turning around to face Maiki, who was standing awestruck, with a small bit of drool escaping from his open mouth. "Ho--wha---who---wh---HOW?!" he stuttered horribly as he stared at his newly resurrected student. Renshi winked enigmatically at Maiki before once again resuming his fighting pose. "Nice try, old man, but you'll have to do better than that to silence Renshi."

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Renshi places his hands in a postition that Maika notices right away. "Oh no can it be! No the 1000th element attack! IT CANT BE! Trees are being uprooted the soil it turning white the sky darkens with a sea of black. Renshi is summoning all the elements needed! With a great attack renshi blast the amazing force towards Maika. The ground in front of renshi is destroyed. BUT! Where is maika. "I guess it will take more then that to silence you renshi...but you still have more to learn!" "Your behing me again!?! But how!" "Like i said you have much much more to learn!"
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Even looking back on it, Renshi didn't know how he survived. Maika came from behind and leapt onto his back, weilding a newer, brighter blade, made of demon bone. It was large, blue, and sharp. Renshi, using the instinct born of his long training and boring repetition of drills, went into a tight forward somersault, designed to throw Maika off of his back and onto the ground. It didn't work, Maika only grabbed his hair and rolled with him, all the while weilding that fearsome blade. He performed his deadly dance of survival, trying to rid himself of the plague on his back, and once he had gotten him free, he simply ran.

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Maika didnt run after him...he knew that renshi would return after he relizes how great of a master Maika is. "He cant run for ever...I know that and he does...he needs much training if he feel he wants to become the next most respected person in the village" Soon enough renshi came back...but different...He had blood pouring down his face..on his close...his hair turned a pitch black formorly yellow. His head band broken in two lay in his hand..His panths torn to the knee with blood speckled all over. What has happened what has renshi become!
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Of course, being the master that maika was, he knew after a second what had gone wrong with Renshi. But why? there was really no reason for him to open himself to the demon Gretlen and become possessed. Now there was really no way but death to clear his soul of Gretlen. With a sigh he began the motions for the expulsion of the demon from Renshi. Unfortunately, the spell required the life of the possessee...it was a price he had to pay.

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But how could he...how could he kill his own son! Maika placed his hand upon renshi's chest and with a gasp.... With a great sound of an explosion renshi rips maika's arm off! Blood pours out onto the ground while maika stands in an almost dead state...renshi then takes out his blood plated iron dagger and crushes it into his fathers,trainers,Supporters....Head...