My Promise
I'm here for you
To help you through.
To hold you.
To be with you.

I need to.
Culture a cure.
To mend your hart, and dreams.
To show you what love truly means.

I'll never run away.
I'll be sure to stay.
And all I can do is pray.
For you to feel the same.

And If your even in pain.
I will be there to kiss it all away.
And make you feel better again.
This is my promise to you.


I wrote this a long time ago. So sorry if it's a bit newbish. Any who, hope you all enjoy. :)

I did ^^ It came from the heart...you can tell.

Well thx Pam. Your appreciation is welcome as always.

That poem to me is Deep.

I ain't really into poetry, and I accidentally clicked here but...wow. very nice

Nice poem but, after reading so many poems that people and my friends make because their in love, these poems are just too identical.

Heres a guys info on my buddy list on aim. He says he wrote it himself.

What if i'm always there when you need me
Will you even care
What if i promise to forever care
Will you need me

What if i tell you that your my only
Will you love me
What if i really want a chance with you
Will you let me

That was just a small part, and it uses repetition throughout. lol.

I'm just saying after a hundred poems love poems need a little more twist in it for it to be anymore interesting.

Well thanks Kaze, I like it when people give me honest feedback. Bare in mind tho this was the *Count on Fingers* 3rd poem. It's bound to be rough around the edges. Still tho, thanks :)