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The_Avenger
05-20-2007, 03:31 PM
I Have Feelings of Why
I Cannot Deny
My Love for this World
Mysteries. Symphonies.
Of How it Works
I Have Feelings of Why
My Mind Can't Reside
In One Place at a Time
I Have Feelings of Why
Just of Why,
Am I in this Place
For A Lifetime
Of Misery and Grace
Pamela
05-24-2007, 03:12 PM
I Have Feelings of Why
I Cannot Deny
My Love for this World
Mysteries. Symphonies.
Of How it Works
I Have Feelings of Why
My Mind Can't Reside
In One Place at a Time
I Have Feelings of Why
Just of Why,
Am I in this Place
For A Lifetime
Of Misery and Grace








I think it was beautifully written and evoked my emotions.
It flowed very well...very nice work.
The_Avenger
05-29-2007, 09:00 PM
Thank you Pamela :)