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Cr187
04-16-2007, 01:30 AM
Fall Apart


If my dreams were ever lost
Along the battles we have fought
I ask of you to search the skies
So as not to let it pass you by

When a dreamers heart grows cold
From jealously and thoughts untold
None shall know her secret heart
And all those dreams just fall apart...

boces
04-16-2007, 02:28 PM
nice poem man

Cr187
04-17-2007, 12:04 AM
nice poem man


Thanks!

Pamela
05-10-2007, 05:25 PM
It speaks of pain to me...again well written and delivered...keep up the good poetry...you have talent.