| I haven't read this story, but if you follow the basic structure and back up your point any view is correct.
Intro:
*Introduction/hook.
*Context
*Thesis(3 categories)
Body Paragraphs(3):
*Thesis (1 Category)
*Introduce quote
*quote
*explain quote
*significance/relate to thesis
Conclusion:
Same as introduction except with different wording and nice ending sentence (you have).
If you edit your story then repost it, then I can look at it and get a clearer view of your structure.
__________________ As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....
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