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**hellsing293** · 11-14-2007, 01:46 AM

So your saying I should make the narrative into a third person instead? I see how you say the I's, me's, my's can be repetitive. In my writing I ussually try not to use the same word too many times or if I do at least space the words apart. Thank you for your suggestions.

My English teacher really annoys me when it comes to writing. She has no problem nick-picking every other word in your story and crossing it out/circling it but gives no explanation as to why and when I confront her she tells me to go away lol. Gets frustrating after a while.

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hellsing293 is Offline Common Sense Posts: 2,533 Credits: 154 Spent time on board: 2 Days and 16:24:43 Hours Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Rhode Island/Coventry Reputation: 63 Rep Power: 9	11-14-2007, 01:46 AM So your saying I should make the narrative into a third person instead? I see how you say the I's, me's, my's can be repetitive. In my writing I ussually try not to use the same word too many times or if I do at least space the words apart. Thank you for your suggestions. My English teacher really annoys me when it comes to writing. She has no problem nick-picking every other word in your story and crossing it out/circling it but gives no explanation as to why and when I confront her she tells me to go away lol. Gets frustrating after a while. As long as darkness flows through my veins, I will never cease, As long as my dreams still haunt me, I will never show mercy, and as long as evil lives I will never die.....